Week 5 - mid module review

I've been trying to find my characters still. I've been finding painting large helps me feel loose. These are both A2, and painted using negative space to help me figure things out.

I've been drawing lots of characters to try and find ones that I find exciting, and have started thumbnailing

I've been thumb nailing very roughly, and trying to plan just by theme

I have two versions of rough text.

VERSION 1

Looking up

1.

I live here

You live there

2.

I watch you

You watch me

3.

I stay still

You move

4.

It grows dark

The world is quiet

5.

And that’s when

One by one

6.

We move

We leap

7.

We peek

We sneak

8.

We race

We stay

9.

Until it is time

The light grows dawn

10.

It is time

To go home

11.

Hello!

12.

Please stay

VERSION 2

Looking up

1.

I look down

You look up

2.

I stay still

You move around

3.

I feel alone

Where did you go?

4.

Are you here?

Or here?

5.

There you are

Why did you go away?

6.

Now nobody looks at me

I am all alone

7.

But wait a minute

Who is that?

And who is that?

8.

What are you doing?

Where are you going in such a hurry?

9

I will help?

Are you cold?

Are you hungry?

10.

I will weave you a blanket with this x

I feel bring you food from x

11.

I am sorry you are alone

We are out here together

12.

But alone